|Reviews for undone|
| Trinity Fai 2/15/13 . chapter 1
I love this poem! I always have to pause between each one to think about it and it's like something plays out in my head almost like a sad movie. You write powerful words and I hope you never give up on that. X3
| BMaddox 11/16/12 . chapter 1
Okay, so I read this like yesterday or something, I think, but anyway I really like this. The structure has such a powerful rhythm and I love that more than anything else about this poem. It makes me stop repetitively to think, to inhale...it's strong.
I also really like the diction. It's also strong. Connor's poems are always spectacular.