|Reviews for Lights|
| aycha 1/1/13 . chapter 1
The Review Game
I like the simile "laughing like delighted children at play." because it conjures a wonderful carefree image.
I also enjoyed the way the tone changes frequently, carefree, to melancholy, through bitter, to dreamy and so on.
I felt the last but one stanza needed more punctuation.
I hope my review is useful!