This one was really good and sad. I would like you to write more on this, perhaps make it several small oneshots?

I would be very interested if the inspiration may come to you, I would like to see more of Williams life, school and all. I liked the feeling in the words and even though short it was powerful. I enjoyed it thoroughly.

I don't see why it should be continued, unless you can explain to me what you would do in the continuation. Its good as a one-shot for now.
This is a weird story, by the way. Not that that's always a bad thing :)

Yikes... its good, make it a one-shot please.