That was creepy. Always loved urban legends, and it just so happens that the Kuchisaki-Onna is one of my favorite foreign ones. Excellent description and writing; I don't get ill easily from these kinds of stories and the description of her scarred mouth made me sick.

Dang.

How has this not received more attention yet? This is one of the best short horror stories I've read (that's been on a website outside of Creepypasta anyway- who am I kidding? This IS Creepypasta material)!

As for a suggestion... I'll let you know if I have one. (Ah, the beauty of posting comments while going 20-some hours without sleep...)

Keep it up!