|Reviews for Greatest Escape|
| Jakeandrose1 4/4/13 . chapter 2
i like it
| h earthserpent 4/4/13 . chapter 14
:D WOOOOO getting better and better by each chapter. :) bring on the next one.
| Lynn K. Hollander 4/4/13 . chapter 1
From your blurb: The possibility of me having a great senior year is second to run ... . This is strange. The idiom, in this construction is 'second to NONE', which would mean that having a great senior is guaranteed. If you meant to suggest that there was little or no chance of having a great year, a clearer statement would be just that: There is no possibility ... OR There is only a remote possibility...
If this is a racing metaphor, it needs a little elaboration: The possibility of me having a great senior year is running second to ... complete disaster/The Tea Party supporting medicare -or anything really improbable.
In the story: coincidences/ coincidentally. -this doesn't mean what the rest of the construction implies. Occurrences or incidents or happenings/spontaneously would make sense, but coincidences/coincidentally don't.
| h earthserpent 4/2/13 . chapter 13
:D awesome they kissed. bring on the next one.
| h earthserpent 3/21/13 . chapter 12
:D THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOO AWWWWWWESOME! YOU NEEEEEEEEEEEED TOOOOOOOOOO UPDATE MORE! :) I LOVE THIS STORY!
| earthserpent 2/24/13 . chapter 11
:D love the chapter! bring on the next one. :)
| eathserpent 2/20/13 . chapter 10
:l eh...bring on the next one.
| eathserpent 2/11/13 . chapter 9
:D love it. hope you update sooooooon. :)
| eathserpent 2/1/13 . chapter 8
:D yay love it. find it a little short but love it. i hope the next one is longer. :)
| earthserpent 1/28/13 . chapter 7
:D woo that was awesome. i think that was the best chapter so fare. :) pleassssssssssse update sooooooooooooooon.
| earthserpent 1/19/13 . chapter 6
alright. :) bring on the next one.
| earthserpent 1/10/13 . chapter 5
:D oh getting good. pleas update soon. :)
| earthserpent 1/1/13 . chapter 4
o_O uh okay. update soon.
| earthserpent 12/1/12 . chapter 3
:D good chapter. keep going.
| H. Earthserpent 11/23/12 . chapter 2
alright, getting good. please update soon.