Really amazing... I've read your other chapters, hope you've still got them somewhere so you can upload and continue. love your story!

WHAT?! I do. It even know how to take this. Who sends kids to their doom like that?! Dad is a twisted father. How could you take Ryan away? That was just wrong, he had just found a new family of sorts. Not sure about this one, but it is interesting until the killer mutant monster started kicking the kids off one by one. It is like a B movie! Announcer voice guy: Just when you thought it was safe to send your kids to an uncharted planet, ATTACK OF THE KILLER MUTANT ALIEN BEINGS!...LOL!

WOW THIS IS ANSOLOUTELY AMAXING WILL FOLLOW WHEN MY PHONE LETS ME SIGN IN!" LOL! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! BTW I LUV CAPS LOCK IN CAS U HAVENT NOTICED! AND EXCLAMATION MARKS! LLOOOOOOLL!