| Reviews for Failed Butterfly Project |
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Qzero99 5/29/13 . chapter 1 Im deeply mentally provoked |
Frankie Stien 11/18/12 . chapter 1I know too many dead butterflies. Very beautifully written, good job. |
HK Shmetty 11/17/12 . chapter 1I've heard of the Butterfly Project. Butterflies don't really work for me but I'll draw other things that appeal to me a little more. I have come to know a lot of times when this has failed, though. This is a great poem and the rhyming flows smoothly without being too overwhelming. Also, I like your personification of the butterfly, it adds a lot of meaning to the poem. Good job! |