Wow, dang. That was very 'in your face'. I liked it! I also love how well you portrayed the fact that you wont settle for anything less than that strong, assertive man you want; while also explaining to the third person he is not good enough. I liked the determined feeling this piece evoked also. Very well done! :)

As always, keep writing!

-Shauni

i like this alot :)

Wow, that is really good. I like the how you are blunt and to the point.