|Reviews for Athena|
| SilentScreaming1944 3/12/13 . chapter 14
5 digital cookies? Dangit! None for Silent... Tis makes me sad...
Hahaha lol LIVES THIS CHAPPIE SO FRIGGIN MUCH XD Bet NOBODY can guess who Silhouette is... :D I honestly don't know myself...
Since i'm a fan can I come up with a pairing name? If yes I have in mind for Alecia and John
Jalecia or Sorcvision :D
| Northrnstar 3/10/13 . chapter 14
This is now my favorite chapter so far! I loved the trolling and omg Richard and Owen together are just so perfect! They are just soooooo cute together, and i love how much development has gone into their relationship! The way they act as though they cant stand each other but secretly care deeply for one another is the best! So many feels! I love how Richard just grabs Owen and goes! The two of them texting in the vent to Alecia and John was funny as was them getting trolled by silhouette who btw is a super cool character! wonder why she was there? ZOMG whats going to happen if/when the group finds out about Owens past!? She cant hide it forever! Wahhhhh! SO MUCH ANTICIPATION! *runs away and hides under blanket*
| SilentScreaming1944 3/1/13 . chapter 13
Call me a fangirl but...
THIS CHAPPIE MADE MY DAY :D It TOTALLY deserves a cheer
HIP HIP! HOORAAA! HIP HIP! HOORAA!
I loved it when Jesse didn't wanna leave Owen :3 SO ADORABLENESS! (I don't say it often enough...)
And HAPPY FRIGGIN (belated) BIRTHDAY NORTHRNSTAR!
| Northrnstar 2/28/13 . chapter 13
First of all, aweee poor Owens fallen hard for Richard! I have sooo many feels towards the two of them. And I like the new Eric character! It's funny how fast Owen and him got under each others skin! And awwweeeee omg poor Jesse losing his parents! I love him to pieces already! And I love how he's attached himself to Owen! Again too cute! and yays! finally Owen's home life is looking up for her! :D Thank God for Envision! but now the question is how he found out Owen was being abused, did one of her friends tell?
| Northrnstar 2/21/13 . chapter 12
I loved the chapter! first of all OMG Alecia and John went on a date! Secondly there were so many feels between Richard and Owen and i loved it! I loved the fight against Thunder, that was really cool and suspenseful, still is with John being unconscious and all. and lol Richard is funny with hearing loss! haha i loved how confused he got with owen being ticked off at him at the end of the chapter XD
| SilentScreaming1944 2/20/13 . chapter 12
I ABSOLUTELY FEIGGIN LOVED IT!
Hehehe (Me and RCA's inside joke-ish thing)
Marcel is gonna get mad when she sees em...(Cue massive troll face)
I need a life...(sighs)
| Northrnstar 2/15/13 . chapter 11
lol I always love reading you guys comentary at the beginning and end of chapter XD
Also, I have to say that the brother/sister moment was adorable! and that, as usual I loved the Owen Richard shipping in the chapter! too cute! and funny lol. AMAZING job as always! _
| northrnstar 2/10/13 . chapter 10
AWESOME CHAPTER! Thank God Owen has such good friends in Richard, Alecia and John. I am glad they are there for her and know what's going on now. It is really cute when Ricard caries Owen around, and I love how she finally admits to having a crush on Richard! lol I ship them _ It was also super cool to see Marcel in the chapter! I love how your guys stories work with each other, its really cool! You probably won't need them, but if you ever need to a character feel free to use Shae or Tan if you want. And the idea of One shots are also a GREAT idea! I hope peoples submit them, cause they would be really cool to read! :D
| SilentScreaming 2/9/13 . chapter 10
MARCEL FOR THE WIN! THIS WAS THE BEST CHAPTER (other than the rest of course XD) WHAT AN AWESOME CHAPPIE :D
| SilentScreaming 2/9/13 . chapter 10
I'm not logged in...but still I have somethin important to say...
THIS CHAPTER WAS FREAKIN AWESOME! MARCEL FTW! GO CONTORTIONISTS! XD XD XD XD
| northrnstar 2/8/13 . chapter 9
OMG best chapter yet! I love how concerned Richard was over Owen! I love them together :D Can't wait to read the next chapter! :D
| Northrnstar 2/5/13 . chapter 5
Only on chapter 4, but I love it so far! You are very detailed in your writing and the story is very creative. Can't wait to catch up on the rest :D
| Shitz-Suji 1/29/13 . chapter 7
Le suspense. XD Ahh, I can't wait for your next update. :D
| Field Empathy 1/19/13 . chapter 1
Ooo... What about:
Eric Hugh, 16, Male, High School Junior.
Six feet tall, slightly above average build (is in good shape, and has muscle definition, but is not in peak physical condition), Caucasian with freckles, medium brown eyes, light brown hair that grows curly, but he keeps it cut short enough so you can't really tell. Is clean shaven.
Likes alternative rock, swimming, can play guitar and sing (not that he'd tell you that). Keeps to himself, very private. Starts out just using powers for his own safety, and eventually gets discovered by other superheroes. (calls himself 'no one' in costume, please come up with a good alias)
Good Person, bad social skills, bad habit (does drugs, but still has a low tolerance).
Powers: can freeze time for up to half an hour. Mostly uses his power in short bursts, because it requires about the same amount of energy as running (not sprinting, but not a jog, either) As he gets older and more in control of his power, he finds that he can pull other people out of the time stream, although this takes considerably more effort (think running while carrying 100 pounds. it's only for short bursts). If he's not careful, he can pass out from the effort. If he looses concentration, he falls back into the time stream. His aging process is not affected in any way by this power. He cannot manipulate matter when time is frozen, he can only move himself or objects that are carried with him.
First discovered his ability to freeze time when he got into a fight in seventh grade and was being beaten down by three High School Students. In a panic, he managed to gather enough strength and focus to buy himself some time and get away.
He doesn't know his dad because it was a one night stand, and his mom is never home. He got into drugs because he found some in his house, and tried them for the heck of it, found that the high he got was pleasantly distracting, and started buying them off the streets. He only gets high occasionally, when he's in a bad mood, or feels a need to forget things he's done. Judges himself very harshly, feels like he never does anything right. He often uses his power after buying drugs, because he's afraid of getting caught or getting in a fight.
The first time he used his powers to help someone else, he heard a fight happening. He used his powers to move to the source of the noise and found a woman in her thirties pointing a gun at a man who looked about the same age. He got as close to the gun as possible, returned to the time stream, grabbed the gun, and in a fit of panic, pulled the gun with him into the time stream, taking it with him about a block away, where he collapsed on the pavement and was found by his future mentor, who was patrolling the area at the time.
He has a soft spot for dogs and kids that are younger and 'better' than him, can learn to get along well with people, as long as they're not jerks, evil, or whiny. He gains a mentor, who motivates him enough to get off drugs and enroll in college.
He will become a hero.
He typically wears jeans (basketball shorts if it's hot), a tee shirt, a zip-up hoodie (if it's cold), and sneakers that are mostly black, with some white.
After being trained, his clothes for hero work are black cargo pants, a close fitting tee shirt (also black), sometimes a black athletic jacket with a red stripe, dark glasses (because he is of the opinion that cowls and masks look stupid on him), and Black athletic shoes.
He has a heck of a time coming up with alibis for his mom, and she never finds out, even when he gets injured (he hides it, it was just a sprained arm). When he's 17, his mom gets arrested for drug possession and he moves in with his mentor, and thinks of him as a father figure. The irony is, he does turn out to be his dad (I know, impossible, but allow me this one improbable detail), and they figure it out when Eric's dad/mentor gets injured. (PM me if you need the whole story, but I don't think you do.)
| KidVarmint 1/9/13 . chapter 7
I loved this chapter! And, why not go with the cliché thing? Have her end up having to confront her father or something like that. You know, just suggesting it.