the descriptions for everything is amazing :)
though its sad that so many people died cuz of a misunderstanding :'(
can't wait to see whats next :D

cant wait to see what happens next!
especially how Aziza and Hamzah get along :)

This is an amaaaazing story!
and i'm only on chapter 1
i think it's cool how u put muslim and arabian themes in it since im a muslim and all :)
anyways, im going start reading the next chapter :D

Wow, she's going to marry Hamzah... I did not expect the war could be ended like this so easily...

Che, hate Mehmet and Boz! I mean, how can war help?

Seriously, this story is fantastic, and if it publishes, I would read it! Not because you're my friend, but because I love those fairytale stories!

... But if you do publish it, publish it in Englis, okay?

PLEASE UPDATE!

Yami

Wow, just wow. This story is really good! I'm not joking with you!

Aziza, eh? I guess you're obsessed with the name Aziz/Aziza...

Armpit! Buttocks! Hehe! Nice one!

Aziza and Hamzah sitting on a tree, F-I-G-H-T-I-N-G!

*Sigh* I know how Aziza feels: It's because I'm a girl I can't do this nor that!

Yami

Very nicely done, keep it up. And I like the pouting kid D