|Reviews for Attempting Love|
| Jun Li Kanashii 1/19/13 . chapter 1
| TinyLaughAlot 11/21/12 . chapter 1
Grrrrr! Its a good poem and all but I know what you are talking about and I feel like a father!
| Naver 11/20/12 . chapter 1
Hmm.. when I read it, it seemed "choppy" ... though I may just of imagined it.. I like the lines
"I can feel my heart bruising and scaring
And freezing over"
I see a block of ice being slit in half, very nice imagery. :)