|Reviews for Hearts Become One|
| Sarah-Brighteyes 1/19/13 . chapter 2
These are beautiful pieces. Great imagery and smooth. I loved them. write on!
| Mylilblackpen 1/18/13 . chapter 3
I like the additions made, very nice and talented. Great addition to an already great piece! :)
| FtXNn 1/5/13 . chapter 3
Cool! :D hehe
| FtXNn 1/5/13 . chapter 2
This really makes me think..as if it's talking to me! :D
| FtXNn 1/5/13 . chapter 1
| CRAZEDbySUGAR 1/3/13 . chapter 3
and...let the water works begin...
holy swiss cheese and crackers...you friend Sean is goooooooooood
this ties it all together quite nicely..
CbS doesn't know what to think anymoreXD
| cupcake98 12/25/12 . chapter 3
I love this so much. it is like the greatest thing I ever read. that how go it was. and most the story's I read or boreding but your stories are awesome. deep up the good work.
| MysteriousFire 12/25/12 . chapter 3
I like the additions he made. Congrats to your friend! And to you, without you the story and this poem wouldn't have existed!
| MysteriousFire 12/25/12 . chapter 2
I like the point of view change! It really makes it perfect.
I was wondering what you would do with the second chapter, but I surely didn't expect this.
It's so sad that she crossed out the two most important things in life in the dictionary in her mind (which is a really nice way to describe that btw). I feel sorry for her.
| MysteriousFire 12/25/12 . chapter 1
Even though it's very short, I you say so much in this chapter! I like it very much.
And I can really recognise past-me in the girl.
| ChibiJinchuuriki 12/24/12 . chapter 3
This last part of the story really fills you with a sense of faith and hope. I felt happy reading that last paragraph :)
| DarknessesDownfall 12/23/12 . chapter 3
Your friend is very gifted! The flow is amazing and it pulls you in. I'm glad you posted it OAO my heart is feeling some more feels
| DarknessesDownfall 12/15/12 . chapter 2
Gaaah! You. Are. Epic! Feeling the feels! I know that feeling and boy does it suck. I'm glad I have people around me who care for me and protect me. Thanks for this Tommy Boy! (And for being a friend :3)
| DarknessesDownfall 12/15/12 . chapter 1
O_O wow! Tommy Boy this is amazing! I almost clicked next without reviewing *smacks my hand* bad!
| CRAZEDbySUGAR 12/1/12 . chapter 2
D: eeeeehhh I don't know how to react because I gave you my feelings during the first part DX
This is amazing Phantom...to see both sides...just completes it
I would love to see more poems written by you in the future :)