Laconic as usual-and I love it.
This deserves much more attention than my gushing, but sometimes people must be smacked in the face in order to notice such things. ;)
Especially since it definitely has a more poetic feel to it. Horror and poetry are PERCIEVED as not going well together.

P.S.-This means get your backhand ready 8D

I really do love this short. So taut and capturing the terror of a person facing an incomprehensible terror. But I've already gushed. XD
Oh yay, you're going to continue it!
Glad you've moved to this site, too. And thanks for taking my word!