It's cute. It's also a really unique topic which is rare on this website. Good job. Though i was kind of expecting it to be continuous with the way it ended. It just seems like you had more to write

Hmmm..
Okay, I liked the beginning. It was ponderous (in a good way, I didn't mean it's slow!) and reflective and it brought out the sort of noble way Rama might have been thinking.
However, the flashback seemed a little out of place, and the conclusion a bit too rushed. But good work, nonetheless:D
Looking forward to more from you!