-flails wildly- Update NOA! Lol at Fear, all infatuated xD And good god I live how John teases him.
I can't tell what John is so anxious about but eh, ima find ou soon enough huh? ;P
Good chapter Shazz!

Bastard! Leaving off with that, pfft. I noticed something where you said 'absently mindedly' ...I'm... I'm just not sure that's right xD
Anyway good chapter!

Great chapter; it's nice to see in the Guardians view. Update soon!

-squeals like schoolgirl- How dare you leave off with that! Bad Shazz, BAD!
Amazing chapter though, I got a little teary eyed at Agent Moore's sorrowful reaction.
And a chapter in John's view? Sweet!

This is a great way to start your story. I really like the mysterious an thrilling atmosphere that this chapter gives off. Good job. Keep up the good work! :D

Wonderful chapter sis! And yes I was to lazy to login XD
I like the progression of the relationship, and the mission itself is getting all the more attention grabbing. I can't wait to see what unfolds!

This is a really good first chapter, amazing actually. Can't wait to keep reading!

Ohohohoho! Finally she admitts her feelings to herself! Now she just has to do so with Sky (John, I prefer to call him Sky though XD). Keep it up

They shot the alarm clock...*hands a cookie* The only thing I've ever done is throw it aganist the wall...or someone...moving on xD

:"( She had to rekill her family...man if this was me...the tale would have ended here...I would have rather shot myself D:

She's had a rough life...I hope it gets better D:

I am very confused but thats a good thing for I want to read more and unconfuse me...if that makes any sense xD

Also have you by any chance watched case closed? Because the name of your main character I take it belongs to a girl from that show xD

Who is he? And why would his eyes make a difference?

Aww when I was reading this I made the connection to what I had in my little drabble and your story, well you know what they say, two great minds think alike xD

This phantom has my intrest, however I hope I can see more of his character because he is seeming like one of those overly confadient villians, that are EVERYWERE XD

Lovely start so far, I would really enjoy seeing how you would combine my ideas and you'res :)

Ricki

Liked it? More like loved it!
Awww, Rachel and Sky make such a fine couple! I don't know why, but every time I see you update a story I feel really happy inside. Maybe it's because I really like your style of writing. Keep up the awesome work!
And I hope Sky's mother is ok. -

Loved it! A wee bit of romance just makes the whole thing all that much better ;D

Great chapter, the actions was fluent and fitting :D Update soon! Oh and take care. I probably won't be speaking to you for like... 2 months. ;_; I'll try to email you when I can.

Getting more amazing by the minute!
(yeah, its me, but im not logged in right now)

Ooo conspiracy? Possible betrayal? The possibilities are endless. I like how short your chapters are. It makes it easy to get through it and remember exactly what you want to say in the review. Brief and interesting. The plot is progressing and so is my interest. I am slowly making my way through this story and will review again soon. Great chapter. Keep it up.