|Reviews for More Than Meets the Eye|
| Un-Ended Tales Unravel 1/27/13 . chapter 1
I like her fiery spirit. I'll say that right off the bat. So far the storyline is intriguing and I'll definitely read the rest of the chapters. Though I do warn you that I am a very slow reader so it may take time for me to review the rest.
Back to the story, you have already created a mystery and I have questions swirling around in my mind that need answers. It's a good way to get a reader hooked for the next chapter, especially that cliffhanger ending. What does she mean 'his eyes'? I guess I'm going to have to read on to find out.
I'll try to read the next chapter as soon as I can.
| ScarletRose7865 1/26/13 . chapter 1
I LOVE beginnings like this! It totally drags the readers in, especially me! And dystopian novels have always been a favorite of mine. This is really well executed as well. I'll have to keep checking in :) Thanks for the great read.
p.s. I love your novel and with the plotline I think you'd enjoy mine as well. Its a dystopian piece too. If you have time check it out. Thanks!
| thornyrosary 1/26/13 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness. o.o Read the introduction and you've already reeled me in! I'm sure that this will be a fantastic story so i'm going to read more but I wanted to put this down anyway. Congratulations, you have another fan.
| WandereroftheWastes88 1/23/13 . chapter 15
"'Well, there are certain tricks in dealing with uncooperative men.' She replied, winking."
Threatening to cut thier balls off and sell them to the bacl market works nicely.
| WandereroftheWastes88 1/23/13 . chapter 4
"Little by Little", hmm? That's a Radiohead song XD
Another great chapter!
| WandereroftheWastes88 1/23/13 . chapter 3
NOOO! MADISON SQUARE GARDEN! NOOO! NOW WE CAN NEVER WATCH THE RANGERS PLAY AGAIN until it's fixed XD.
Oh, and when that war thing is over.
| WandereroftheWastes88 1/23/13 . chapter 1
I'm sorry, I just saw "Battle of Identity" and I was instantly reminded of Bodysnatchers, which is an amazing song.
| Allen Wade 1/17/13 . chapter 16
Yet another well-done chapter, once again leaving us readers hanging in the balance between the two opposing forces in this story. I will be looking forward to updates, until then, peace out!
PS: thank you for the mention, i wasn't expecting it!
| TheChronicLiar 1/17/13 . chapter 2
I like how you gave a background story and gave vital information for the story in this chapter. Also, I've always wanted to shoot my alarm clock as well.
| TheChronicLiar 1/17/13 . chapter 1
I really do enjoy how the story is coming about. The introduction is attention catching enough to pull a reader in and keep the reading.
| Allen Wade 1/3/13 . chapter 13
The suspense is KILLING me
| AJ Sneaks 1/3/13 . chapter 13
Eww, I hope he doesn't have the chance to touch her! And I reeeeally think that the attractive guy is her Guardian!
| AJ Sneaks 1/3/13 . chapter 12
Ooh, is it the Guardian?
| AJ Sneaks 12/28/12 . chapter 11
Well. He's more than mysterious, he's closed off. Which is fine, considering what the Phantom people do to innocents. But still, I wish we could know something about him. I guess I'll just have to watch for more chapters and keep reading to find out.
| AJ Sneaks 12/28/12 . chapter 10
I wonder if this contact has any real importance to the rest of the story. I wonder if (when?) we'll see what Sky looks like, and what his real name is.