I like her fiery spirit. I'll say that right off the bat. So far the storyline is intriguing and I'll definitely read the rest of the chapters. Though I do warn you that I am a very slow reader so it may take time for me to review the rest.

Back to the story, you have already created a mystery and I have questions swirling around in my mind that need answers. It's a good way to get a reader hooked for the next chapter, especially that cliffhanger ending. What does she mean 'his eyes'? I guess I'm going to have to read on to find out.

I'll try to read the next chapter as soon as I can.

I LOVE beginnings like this! It totally drags the readers in, especially me! And dystopian novels have always been a favorite of mine. This is really well executed as well. I'll have to keep checking in :) Thanks for the great read.

p.s. I love your novel and with the plotline I think you'd enjoy mine as well. Its a dystopian piece too. If you have time check it out. Thanks!

Oh my goodness. o.o Read the introduction and you've already reeled me in! I'm sure that this will be a fantastic story so i'm going to read more but I wanted to put this down anyway. Congratulations, you have another fan.

"'Well, there are certain tricks in dealing with uncooperative men.' She replied, winking."

Threatening to cut thier balls off and sell them to the bacl market works nicely.

"Little by Little", hmm? That's a Radiohead song XD

Another great chapter!

NOOO! MADISON SQUARE GARDEN! NOOO! NOW WE CAN NEVER WATCH THE RANGERS PLAY AGAIN until it's fixed XD.

Oh, and when that war thing is over.

I'm sorry, I just saw "Battle of Identity" and I was instantly reminded of Bodysnatchers, which is an amazing song.

Yet another well-done chapter, once again leaving us readers hanging in the balance between the two opposing forces in this story. I will be looking forward to updates, until then, peace out!
PS: thank you for the mention, i wasn't expecting it!

I like how you gave a background story and gave vital information for the story in this chapter. Also, I've always wanted to shoot my alarm clock as well.

I really do enjoy how the story is coming about. The introduction is attention catching enough to pull a reader in and keep the reading.

The suspense is KILLING me

Eww, I hope he doesn't have the chance to touch her! And I reeeeally think that the attractive guy is her Guardian!

Ooh, is it the Guardian?

Well. He's more than mysterious, he's closed off. Which is fine, considering what the Phantom people do to innocents. But still, I wish we could know something about him. I guess I'll just have to watch for more chapters and keep reading to find out.

I wonder if this contact has any real importance to the rest of the story. I wonder if (when?) we'll see what Sky looks like, and what his real name is.