Love it, but as always I'm wishing for more.

Yeah, an update! -insert tears of joy- As always, a great chapter, great plot, and great character interaction. Please, keep up the amazing work!

I love this story! The plot is incredibly original, the characters are so easy to fall in live with, and the action is flawlessly written. Keep up the great writing!

Wow, you are really good. As I'm reading I find I have to keep reminding myself this isn't a book thats been publised. I can't wait to find out what happens next and I really hope that you stick with it till the end. I can definatly see this as a book.
-Helios

I've really been looking forward to reading about the Defense class. You should post again soon.

Man that Vera girl is a real b*. She just needs to take a chill pill and chillax haha. The touch of barbs on the rungs was very interesting but not to stressful, I can believe the little buggars poking out and scratching your palms.

Great character builder chapter and adding to the tension to the story. Building up the inbetween chapters of our story is a huge plus that is good to get done. That way its not to fast paced and readers can understand your characters feelings more.

Well I have to say when I came across this story, I at first had some misgivings. Thought it would be stereotypical/crap/superficial writing...
Now, having devoured all 18 chaps in an hour...
Thanks! This is brilliant, think Aubrey is an amazing character and I love Vince... The shadows in the palace creeped me out so badly, and Luke- elementally bonded, predictable but wonderfully described.

Wowsah! Sorry I haven't written a review for your story at all! -face palm- I is a bad reader and reviewer, but I do like this one chapter. It has a great feel to it where the game can be a good character builder and team builder exercise.

Like you said, the last two chapters did feel like you were trying to spit them out and get them online for use to read. But still a good read for me, though! I really hope there will be more to do with the Mansion and Stella's past, she interests me immensely and so mysterious at the same time.

Oh man do I want to play that game. I sounds like so much fun. I really would like some illustrations of Stella and Garrett. I really want to read the next chapter, so update soon!

Awesome as always. My apologies for not reviewing last chapter but keep in mind that I always think you've done a good job. Really, I love this story.

Oh, please, please update! I love your story. You're doing a wonderful job of it. Setting up so many different plot turns and filling in your characters so that they seem true and real. You are staying consistent to the spirit of your story, and, to my utter relief, your grammar and spelling are quite good, as well.

As usual, I loved it. *Sniffles and wipes tears from cheeks* please remember me when you become famous!

Stella does seem to be fading a bit from a well rounded 3-D character into a naive teenager with not much sense in her, even though I adore her. Some of her responses don't seem very human-like (regardless of her angelic blood), and kind of confusing, but its easily fixable, and charming and flawed Aubrey COMPLETELY makes up for it. She reminds me somewhat of Christina from Divergent, by Veronica Roth...

Anyway, I'm curious about the Elemental thing with Luke. Like, how did it happen? And I cannot wait to see more chapters that you are producing and I hope that the part with 'Ifrit, Lord of Blaze' will be up soon!

Then you can explain exactly what a Baykok is! ;)

Awaiting the update!

Oh, Vince. I haven't hear jokes like that since seventh grade.

I know I'm only reviewing now, but I love this story. UPDATE DAMMIT.

The only reason i havnt reviewed ur story and most of the other stories i read is cause i believe im bad luck! the author almost always stops writing for the longest know even if i dont review is not cause i dont like the story its because i love it ;-).