|Reviews for Unorthodox Muse|
| Greyleaf 12/17/12 . chapter 1
This surprised me. I very much enjoyed the character of the ‘muse’. The descriptions of the three ‘inspirational’ encounters were good. The beginning is a little stilted which, I think, keeps your reader from liking your protagonist or caring much for his predicament. It also contrasts with the style of the narrative towards the end, which is actually more readable. This is a good start and could be even better with a little work (God! I sound like my teacher.) Thanks for posting this.