|Reviews for Tone Deaf|
| tolerate 11/29/12 . chapter 1
When I read this in my mind, it had a really good rhythm to it. It's in bits and bits but the way it flows is special. I loved the ways you described the dance, how you felt and what she did. All in all, it's a really good poem. Keep writing!
| Felrain 11/27/12 . chapter 1
This was strange, but nicely done with a good use I words