this story so far was, in a word, amazing. i can't wait for updates!

Wow... that complicates things. A lot.

If Gabriel is not to be trusted, then I think Elizabeth is going to get caught in an even choice between her lover and Lucy. Let's see what you'll decide.

Good suspense at the end. I'm curious to see who the traitor is.

Damn, I feel bad that Lucy got raped by her father :/

At least she has a new friend now.

The beginning details seemed similar to that of an alien chest-buster preparing to come out of its host xD.
Yeah, my geeky side exposed, it was really interesting. I'll certainly be reading more.

I think she deserves at least a little piece of happiness. I think it's sweet that you added that.

From what I've gathered so far the story is really Interesting, and the love between Elizabeth and Gabriel is kinda like a forbidden love. Really good so far, keep it up!

I love it so far :)

great story so far :)

I'm in love with your story! omfg all the angst aaaaaaah.
hope you update soon!
(also a few spelling mistakes like withing instead of within)

I am liking this so far. Very creative.

Very interesting thus far. I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter. _

Its interesting but why are several chapters on the same 1st chapter page? You coulda broken em up, or did you jus feel like doing it this way?