|Reviews for The Rise Of The Zombie Apocalypse|
| Kurt Kyre 1/1/13 . chapter 1
I'm sorry. but I have to be honest. This is un-readable. I'd be more specific, but I am not sure where to begin. You have terrible grammar and sentence structure. The spelling is worse. The dialogue is like a poor translation of a japanese video game. I hate to be so negative, but the only thing I can say about this is that it should be deleted and you should start over.