Wow. This is so touching...
This is something stupid I picked up from school, but I also really rather like the shape of this poem. It looks like the bathroom lock. Was this intentional?

Stop being so relate-able! This is crazy. I swear you are my writing twin. But I love this too. The depth and the image it created was amazing. It also had a slight flow and great rhyming. But the thing i loved the most is the fact that you're able to plaster pain and emotion into just 8 short lines and still make it have an impact on the reader. A lot of writers can't do that and you do that exquisitely. Great write.

This sounds like something someone would right while they were crying after getting emotionally hurt ): It's really good, but I'm sorry something made you feel this way

ah I found this deep, been there nice short poem cheers x