|Reviews for Sanctuary Vol II: Earth's Protectors|
| Clear World 12/4/12 . chapter 1
It's soooo long. Not bad, but sooooo long.
I tried to read it but it was never giving me a break. I need a break somewhere to recollect my thought and figure what is happening.
| Needless 11/29/12 . chapter 1
I strongly recommend you divide this into several smaller chapters. An 18,000 word chapter isn't very attractive.