That's such a sad story but surprisingly good!

This is interesting, but I think you could have focused it on David's afterlife, or at least explored it a bit further. I mean, to me, at least, a boy being drowned by bullies idn't nearly as creepy as a ghost in a camp.

Great story with a nice concept! Gj!

Sad story, and it has that ghost theme into it. I'm not a believer of ghosts, but do I love my ghost stories!

Hermie