|Reviews for Fate of a Lycanthrope (updated)|
| Swallow-tailed Kite 11/30/12 . chapter 1
Cool, except for the fight scene bit, were they doing it in wolf form or human form? Because while you were saying "black wolf... grey wolf...", you also said arms and kick and stuff, which wolves aren't likely to have or do, so perhaps a bit of clarification on that part would be nice :]
You forgot some punctuation marks, like ["Please…say something…anything-insert fullstop-"] and ["I love you as well-insert comma-" Keiko blushed, ... it back.]. Some minor capitalization mistakes where a word in the middle of a sentence is capitalized along with the first, such as ["Thank you Mom, We Love you"].
Otherwise, great start