|Reviews for The Underdogs|
| Y. S. Wong 5/23/13 . chapter 1
You! It's you! I've heard a lot about you, fellow writer with letters for a given name. But being the rebel that I am, I shall read not Ishiki, but this!
Oho, so it's a gathering quest type story. Gotta say, not necessarily the most original type of plot, but hey, it's all about execution. So far, I don't have much to say on plot since it's just the prologue and this is basically just a plop of backstory, but it's interesting nonetheless.
What intrigued me the most was actually the description you put up. Sounds like you've got quite the motley crew of characters lined up, so I shall press forward to see what they're like!
| ChocoMaw 12/11/12 . chapter 2
Wow I am really enjoying your story. I am looking forward the next chapter
| ChocoMaw 12/11/12 . chapter 1
Hello TK Anez, once I started I could not stop reading too. It is really a simple and fascinating prologue, how could I say ? It shows that you know where you are going and that you built your own world. Nice prologue,I am going to read Chapter II and I have no doubt it will be a great pleasure ;) Thank you
| lazysleep 12/7/12 . chapter 2
| cool sapc 12/6/12 . chapter 2
Yay! I finally finished this chapter! It's great, and I really like Tak. :)
| Miss Miya 12/5/12 . chapter 2
I'm really enjoying this, update! :)
| c'estquatre 12/4/12 . chapter 1
The prologue sounds something Zelda like, an almost fey, fantasy, RPG type opening. If that's what you're going for, great, all in all, it sounds like one of those histories that are recorded on stone tablets and showing in the prologue and serves as foreshadowing.
Yea, but the second chapter's formatting makes it hard to read...
| cool sapc 12/4/12 . chapter 1
O.O Ooh... this looks good! Can't wait to read the next part!