| Reviews for The Incidents |
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Scratch100 1/29/13 . chapter 3This is truely a phenominal story. Thank you, just... thank you |
Samsonet 12/24/12 . chapter 6"I'm an architect, not a detective." "And I'm an astronomer. You don't see me complaining." I just, really, really like this part. Thank you so much for writing this story! It's so much fun! and lol at Antei's reaction to a guy in his house. |
CharissaKarn 12/12/12 . chapter 4teehee :D I LOVE IT! :D yay! thank you for the awesome update! :D teehee cannot wait to read more! :P |
CharissaKarn 12/10/12 . chapter 3WOAH! what? this is trippy! hahaha cannot wait to read more! :D please update again soon! :) |
TroubledRomantic 12/9/12 . chapter 3 ("Troubled Romantic" is my fanfiction . net name, by the way.) That was so perfect for Adrian, giving his friend non-alcoholic beer. Hahahaha! About the "alphabetical murders" - well, that seemed kinda cliched to me, but I'm sure you have a reason for it later on. When I saw this chapter was titled "the Apartment Incident", I think the other story was the first thing I thought of. Yay for continuity! As a final note... thank you for being so reliable for updating this story. It means a lot to me, haha. |
CharissaKarn 12/5/12 . chapter 2ahaha this is really interesting! :) i'm looking forward to reading more!: ) please update again soon! |
CharissaKarn 12/4/12 . chapter 1Woah, well this is good! :D ahah next chapter! :) |
TroubledRomantic 12/4/12 . chapter 2 Thank you for updating this! Adrian is entertaining as always. I do think that line where he talks about Margaret watching TV and stuff could have been a bit smoother, but that's your call. Please update quickly! I really like this story. |
Chapter2 12/2/12 . chapter 1:) Just... thank you. I thought maybe you had given up writing for fictionpress, but I'm glad to see that was wrong. This is going to be one heck of a case! I do have a question, though: what era do these stories take place in? The names and scenario sound vaguely Victorian, yet Antei has a cell phone and can text with it. Adrian talks in an odd mixture of modern slang and Sherlock Holmes-type language (that one is easily explained by his character, though.) The world in which all of these coexist has got to be really interesting and I would love to see more of it! |