|Reviews for The tales of Faylinn Forest|
| LucasKing 12/1/12 . chapter 1
Real nice, looks like a promising project. However some things I found slightly off. "Do not be jealous of the other girls because they flowered earlier then you" I think suggests that the problem was on Ellette's part not on the fairies that said she cannot collect berries because she isn't pretty enough. And the use of the word tiny, was that intentional? I noticed it come up a lot through the chapter. But other than that great stuff.
| Zoe 12/1/12 . chapter 1
Awww so cute! It's lovely!