i think it is good for a sad story, it is really good! Maybe change a few of the words...

This is really good, you have put so much feeling into it! I'd love to read more, you could be an author 3

ahhhh that was really well written ›‹

Wow, this is truly heartfelt. This has really touched me. You are so gifted (L)

Hey, it is so so true. This is ridiculously good and I hope you want to be a writer, because you bloody could be!
From J
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Once again you make me proud to have such a talented daughter who just needs to believe in her abilities to recognise those talents for herself.

As for the subject matter it's so beautifully written with such an eye for those important details and show the level of compassion and caring that make me so so proud of you - on first read I did worry that this was self-observation but as you are neither fat nor ugly it can't possibly be, not directly anyway - but it DOES show how you think of others ahead of yourself.

I know you are sitting there reading this now going "Oh Dad!" and debating deleting this review - well don't...you should be proud of all that you do and recognise the truly beautiful talent that you have and embrace it with all your might!

Proud Dad :)

I think that reading this has made me think about what i say next time to some people... even though i may mean it as a joke, they might not see that. Beth I'm glad i read this (y) Gonna make me think twice before saying anything!

Well, I somewhat agree with this story.
This story is for me a very sensitive.
And when I read that, I was quite interesting.

Intriguing...sounds really personal..all you gotta remember is even though it doesn't feel like u have a real friend, there is always someone there for you.. x p.s. also don't let what people say get you down because most things they say they don't mean or they're just jealous, take it from someone who knows this..people are really worth this crap..xxxxx

Aww, I teared up! This is beautiful!