Err... Okay. Wasn't expecting that.

Okay, I've noticed a lot of run-o sentence, but other than that, it's all right. Even thought I usually hate sarsactic characters I actually like Barry :D

I only wish there could be less... I don't know how to say... more important stuff? Plot points? I don't mean the story should go only one way, but sometimes adding to much makes a story lose essence, don't you think?

P.S. I'm really liking it so far, so please finish it! Many awesome stories are dropped and I'm traumatized with that O.O

Hehe, I'm looking forward to see those two get along better. Poor Barry. He got stuck with that kind of girl haha

P.S. I wanna see his real name! :D

Hmmm. I like Clancy. She doesn't seem like the typical character. And you lfet me interested :D Good story!

This story is so so good, i mean I'm in LOVE with it please continue this story )

Hey i just happened to stop by this but it's actually really good. I love how the plot is developing so far, and especially the funny moments between Clancy and 'Barry'. Can't wait for more :3

I like it.
I didn't notice any major errors.
Keep writing, and I'll be waiting for your next update. ]

Haha! I loved this chapter. Keep up the good work!

Bravo! I can't wait for the next chapter!

I enjoyed this story very much. Please continue you work!
-FT

I need to meet the werewolf. Write the next chapter. I need to meet him! Please!