What a nightmare. The last door sent a shiver up my spine, I loved it.

Whoa, that was some dream! I liked how you portrayed the darkness to this, and the rhythm matched the theme, I think.

Hauntingly beautiful. Brilliant as always!

xx

I love the imagery and vagueness throughout the poem, until the last line, because it left me wondering "what nightmare is this?" Until of course, I noticed that it was exactly that, a nightmare. I really like this piece and I think it was brilliantly crafted, I like how it told a story in the sense that the speaker went from door to door. Very chilling as well but brilliant nonetheless.

What a horrid dream :( Despite this, however, a brilliantly crafted poem. Good, solid rhyme scheme and fabulous imagery as always :)

I wonder what the person saw. Great poem as always. :)

very good enjoyed x