Well, well, well. You just made my night.

I'm so very excited for this project. I always look at the profiles of someone before I read their stuff, and I love what I'm seeing! Historical Fiction is my second favorite genre, behind biographies. I love that you have a family relation to the Tudor family. They're high up on my list of favorites. I'd love to talk about it some time.

Anyways, back to the review. You have a wonderful ability of drawing pictures with your words. Your metaphors and analogies flow seamlessly. There's nothing more painful to read than a forced metaphor.

I like the characters already. You've given the reader a small taste of their personalities without divulging too much and boring us.

Your summary is *perfect*. I can't find anything to correct or complain about. I'm really quite awestruck! Because of this, I'll be following this story, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.