| Reviews for The Way It Used To Be |
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Mr Theory 4/7/13 . chapter 1I don't really get it. |
CRAZEDbySUGAR 12/19/12 . chapter 1wow...the mindsets between the boy and The Soldier...one relaxed wondering what the future will bring meanwhile the other is fighting to protect his past (in a way...the beach holds his memories after all) this is beautifully written :) I love itX3 Keep on writing :D |
ChibiJinchuuriki 12/7/12 . chapter 1This is a really intriguing piece you've written, the way you contrast the boy and the soldier's points of view is a pretty nice technique. I think it shows the innocence of childhood really well :) |
MysteriousFire 12/4/12 . chapter 1Very nice story! I like how he asbolutely no idea what the future will bring, but keeps wondering. What war can do with one's life... |