Great story, great chapter!

I am such a sucker for vampire stories. I start reading and just can't stop. Yours is definitely no exception. Nice job. Keep going!

Hey, didn't feel like logging in but I just wanted to tell you I love this story. Very sympathetic and likeable protagonist. Please update soon :)

Hey Kate, I just had to come back to your story. I was a bit nervous to read a 5,000 word chapter but it flew by so fast! Keep up the good work and write Chapter 4 ASAP.

Very interesting and an amazing, superb read! This was very good, I would love to read another story of yours, I like the way you describe and the way your character's act. Though I'm not a big fan of vampire stories, I still enjoyed this very much. Continue to write. :)

Great! Love your story. I'll wait for the next one.

Hi. Amazing story. It's really great. I can't stop myself from reading it. Keep on going!

Nicely written, I didn't even catch any errors! The story also has a suspenseful note to it, along with interesting and intense character emotions.
Well done and keep it up!

Great story, keep going! :D

this is j.l. horowitz by the way. now on to ur story

yes, i was very impressed by your story. i liked Charlotte and the fear u channel in her words. well done! And i learned a new word (demure)!

now on to the critisim. you tended to mispell words several times or use 'my' instead of me. Its no biggie but just proofread the story to check for those mistake. I was a bit confused when the vamp asked what she was. Im sure this lil mystery will be explored and i'm more than glad to hang on to the ride!

p.s. thanks for reviewing my story! ill follow ur story if u follow mine