Reviews for Electric Wire
BexishDevil 1/2/13 . chapter 20
sequel? And you should so try to publish this if you would run over it and spell/grammar check it, I think you could publish it and sell it.

-Black&Blue

-Black&Blue
sky8677 1/1/13 . chapter 17
Love it!
Alice6700 12/31/12 . chapter 16
Really like this story :) please update soon!
sky8677 12/31/12 . chapter 16
I really do love all this story :)
BexishDevil 12/29/12 . chapter 16
Good! I can't wait for the next chapter, Noah and Brooke fighting has been driving me crazy!

-Black&Blue
Amy90 12/29/12 . chapter 16
I think after all of this, Noah might be able to add two and two on his own. But still, it's kind of stupid that Brooke doesn't tell him. Maybe, if she really can't talk about it, she could at least give Joe or Nick the permisson to tell Noah?
I mean, this whole secrecy is just unnecessary.
Holsiepops 12/27/12 . chapter 15
Awwww love this! Its super cute story! Please update soon :)
Amy90 12/27/12 . chapter 15
Why can't she just tell Noah the whole story? To me she seems to be pretty much over it. And everyone important to her seems to know the main details. So where's the problem? It's obvious she wants to tell him...
And somehow I'm suspecting that she'll get over Noah so quickly. I mean, they're married after all. ;)
snapapplez101 12/26/12 . chapter 9
NO! Not Vegemite, NO!
Amy90 12/26/12 . chapter 14
This story is so cute! There's a lot of tension in it, it's great! And I love the big brothers, as annoying as they sometimes are, they still look out for Noah and Brooke. Can't wait to read more!
Abbyluvsyou 12/25/12 . chapter 14
I love this chapter! Please, please, please! upload soon!
BexishDevil 12/21/12 . chapter 9
Fairy bread? Never heard of it but it sounds good
sky8677 12/20/12 . chapter 8
I love all the story but this chapter was amazing! The nickname was so funny!
snapapplez101 12/18/12 . chapter 6
UUUUUUUUUUUGH. you write good stories...but I must gets more !
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Update.
Now.
:3
BexishDevil 12/16/12 . chapter 4
I really like this story! I would buy it if it was an actual book.

-Black&Blue
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