| Reviews for Jewel Box |
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T.S. Atlas 12/14/12 . chapter 1Amazing. Utterly, amazing. If you were the character, would you regret opening that box? |
Naver 12/10/12 . chapter 1Woh. I really like this, this is quite amazing. Though I hate the sentence "That peaceful, poisonous song will lull you to sleep." I just hate the world lull,but don't mind that it was a really good work of fiction! I can picture someone walking towards the box and trying to open it,but thinking again as they see a ghost tell a story about this. I think this could be a prologue almost to a larger story,but to be honest I don't think I want a story to go with this I think I might just want to write one in my head or just think about it, again really liked this. Continue to write. :) |