I still think Mabel is awesome.

Nice interaction between teh two by the way, but didn't they say they were gonna kill him? Makes me wonder.

I'll continue reading/reviewing another day, heh. I read a lot of stories and never update mine haha

Holy crap. Kill!? Oh well.

It's been three chapters and I already love Mabel, haha.

Fiona will die violently, won't she?

Is Mabel a girl or a boy? I didn't get it, heh.

So far, so good. I liked the introduction and the way you set the world before anything happens, and I also liked how you introduced Fiona before we knew how EVAHL she was.

Besides your summary is catchy!

The introduciton was... interesting...

Amazing chapter! It's almost over? *sniff* oh well. I'll read the next one. :)
Haha technically it was 8:05 here when you posted the chapter, so technically you aren't late, so technically no problem. ;)
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx

Just casually quoting starkid at the end! Haha! Joe walker dies. I think it's my favourite so far!
Why doesn't he like jake? Jake is awesome! I LOVE JAKE! And I now get why she is a bit odd! Woo!
Well done peanut! I'm so proud of you! :')

amazing chapter! It was a little hard to follow, but I think I get it now. It isn't understandable from the beginning of the conversation, but later on it becomes more clear who's related to whom. it's good that you're offering explanations though... I don't think many people will need them. I'm practically famous for being in a constant state of confusion and, like I said, I get it. I wonder what this will mean for her and her friends/acquaintences/whoever's involved.
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx

Amazing chapter! You're right, not much happens, but I wonder about Samien's comment right at the end...
Happy Easter to you too! :)
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx

I am sorry to say that i am too busy saving team starkid from starkid hating aliens, with my trusty steed bullseye, to write a review.
Only joking, I would never do that to you.
Another great chapter peanut! I am loving this story and loving jake more and more! ;)
Keep it up!

Amazing amazing chapter! I don't think it seems too off from the rest of the story... I mean it doesnt feel like you just squeezed it in. I wonder what's going on with Mabel? I can't wait to find out!
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx

Hmm better senses and control of her magic...cool :) I wonder who her Familiar/Laniar will be..good job on the chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next :)

Wolfy

Ooh this is quite good so far :) I'm really enjoying this story! :3 I liked the bit with the lion, and the wolf dream/vision thing, that was cool :D I can't wait to read more :) good luck in your writing!

Wolfy

Well, the current title it quite original, although i don't understand the connection it has with the story itself. But that's what intrigued me to read it.
Anyway, if you are really considering to change it, the 'Legend of a Fighter' seems an interesting choice. The other one sounds quite ordinary and overused. In the end, though, it's your decision. I'm just suggesting here.

I didn't complain about the ice cream!

I start reading the story today and i couldn't stop. You have amazing writing skills. I really liked it so far. Jake is sure one of my favorites, but i can't say that i dislike anyone. Keep up with the good work! Off to the next chapter...