I feel that you got a bit sloppy with the ending, not that it's bad because the story is still beautiful but I feel you put more effort in the beginning chapters and sort of drifted off around chapter 7.

Either way I really love the story and the characters! :)

Beautiful!

I love this! It's an engaging story (plus I'm a sucker for things like this)

Can't wait to read more!

This story is so cute

I love how you're starting to make Collin develop a feeling!

I really love this story, please keep uploading chapters :)

Betrayed by Oliver's sister. I am intrigued by this story! Please do the kindness of writing more chapters.

A very interesting plot twist. But I'm confused a little. Is Oliver's sister Molly or Sylvia?

Except for a few spelling mistakes it's okay. Nice chapter end by the way. I'll be waiting for the next chapter eagerly. :)

That very last paragraph. BOOM so much suspense.
Definitely looking forward to chapter 3. I want to know who's in that photo! Hehe

full no suspense XD

ok WHEN'S THE NEXT CHAPTER COMING XDD

I really found this rather intriguing!
Especially the beginning. In my experience the beginning of a story has to catch your attention otherwise it's not going to be a good story. And this really caught my attention!

I really look forward to the next chapter!
Midnight