|Reviews for Written In the Air|
| AWhisperInTheShadows 3/25/13 . chapter 8
I feel that you got a bit sloppy with the ending, not that it's bad because the story is still beautiful but I feel you put more effort in the beginning chapters and sort of drifted off around chapter 7.
Either way I really love the story and the characters! :)
| Moonlite 880 3/18/13 . chapter 8
| PSIDontKnow 2/20/13 . chapter 5
I love this! It's an engaging story (plus I'm a sucker for things like this)
Can't wait to read more!
| Dragon 1/1/13 . chapter 3
This story is so cute
| Midnight's Sunset 1/3/13 . chapter 3
I love how you're starting to make Collin develop a feeling!
I really love this story, please keep uploading chapters :)
| Nintendo Fan 101 12/27/12 . chapter 3
Betrayed by Oliver's sister. I am intrigued by this story! Please do the kindness of writing more chapters.
| Scribble Scribe 12/27/12 . chapter 3
A very interesting plot twist. But I'm confused a little. Is Oliver's sister Molly or Sylvia?
| Scribble Scribe 12/17/12 . chapter 2
Except for a few spelling mistakes it's okay. Nice chapter end by the way. I'll be waiting for the next chapter eagerly. :)
| Midnight's Sunset 12/10/12 . chapter 2
That very last paragraph. BOOM so much suspense.
Definitely looking forward to chapter 3. I want to know who's in that photo! Hehe
| yukiteddy 12/9/12 . chapter 2
full no suspense XD
| yukiteddy 12/8/12 . chapter 1
ok WHEN'S THE NEXT CHAPTER COMING XDD
| Midnight's Sunset 12/7/12 . chapter 1
I really found this rather intriguing!
Especially the beginning. In my experience the beginning of a story has to catch your attention otherwise it's not going to be a good story. And this really caught my attention!
I really look forward to the next chapter!