|Reviews for A Reluctant Master|
| Revamp 4/18/13 . chapter 15
This was a nice end to Tenjou's arc. I can't wait to see what else you have instore for the readers in yournext chapters. I can't wait until your next update.
| Revamp 4/18/13 . chapter 14
This chapter had quite a bit of action in it. Miho is an interesting bad guy and I love her Artifact and how it symbolizes betrayal. I doubt Shinya will join the knights but I could be wrong.
| Revamp 4/18/13 . chapter 13
It's nice to see character growth in shinya and I'm glad he and Rei patched things up. I wonder what will happen with Miho and Tenjou.
| Revamp 4/18/13 . chapter 12
I see that the two are finally going to talk. I wonder what suppressed feelings Rei has and how she really feels.
| Revamp 4/17/13 . chapter 11
Interesting revelation at the end of this chapter about Alice's feelings tiward Rei. I wonder exactly what she does feel towards her. Whatever it is, I am sure she's aware of it.
| Revamp 4/17/13 . chapter 10
Miho is an interesting character. I like her demeanor and her Artifact is interesting. I wondee why the Green Knights want Rei's Artifact and how many there are.
| Revamp 4/17/13 . chapter 9
This chapter added to the mystery of the motives of the Artifact Hunters as well as bring depth to Rei's character.
| Revamp 4/16/13 . chapter 8
Things are really building up around Rei and Tenjou. I like the ability of his Artifact and his character in general. I have to wonder about him being hit by a car and surviving. That's quite a mystery.
| Revamp 4/16/13 . chapter 7
this new student seems interesting. I wonder what powers his Artifact has.
| Revamp 4/10/13 . chapter 6
This chapter explains the last a lot better, and it portrays the emotions that I believed Shinya should have been feeling. It all makes better sense now, and I thought the artifact might have had something to do with the sudden confession.
Don't get me wrong, they make a good couple but I would rather their relationship come naturally. I hope that happens in later chapters now that the artifact has been removed.
| Revamp 4/10/13 . chapter 5
So, the Artifact works on love? That's interesting, and a nice approach to it. However thier relationship seemed a little rushed. I feel like Shinya should have had more complications and inner turmoil over it.
Other than that, this chapter was good. I am enjoying your story so far.
| Revamp 4/10/13 . chapter 4
There was some interesting interaction between Alice and Shinya here. Now I'm wondering what the Artifact is myself. Even if it was hard to write you pulled it off smoothly.
| Revamp 4/10/13 . chapter 3
Shinya continues to analyze the source of Alice's problems. I feel sorry for Rei, being so discouraged because of the powers of her artifact. I hope she finds someone to love. I liked the fluffy moment with Alice and Shinya. It was interesting to see him lose composure.
I liked his thoughts on her blank eyes. I wonder if that's a side-effect of her artifact.
| Revamp 4/5/13 . chapter 2
This chapter is also quite intriguing. Alice is showing her impish side and the appearance of another artifact has been made by Rei, whom I am really liking so far. I love the relation to Midas and Faust as back up to your artifacts. Brilliant move.
| Revamp 4/3/13 . chapter 1
This story is great so far. I love the idea of the artifacts and thier conditions and terms. I also find your characters endearing and the interaction between Shinya and his maid comical and intriguing.