Reviews for A Reluctant Master
Revamp 4/18/13 . chapter 15
This was a nice end to Tenjou's arc. I can't wait to see what else you have instore for the readers in yournext chapters. I can't wait until your next update.
Revamp 4/18/13 . chapter 14
This chapter had quite a bit of action in it. Miho is an interesting bad guy and I love her Artifact and how it symbolizes betrayal. I doubt Shinya will join the knights but I could be wrong.
Revamp 4/18/13 . chapter 13
It's nice to see character growth in shinya and I'm glad he and Rei patched things up. I wonder what will happen with Miho and Tenjou.
Revamp 4/18/13 . chapter 12
I see that the two are finally going to talk. I wonder what suppressed feelings Rei has and how she really feels.
Revamp 4/17/13 . chapter 11
Interesting revelation at the end of this chapter about Alice's feelings tiward Rei. I wonder exactly what she does feel towards her. Whatever it is, I am sure she's aware of it.
Revamp 4/17/13 . chapter 10
Miho is an interesting character. I like her demeanor and her Artifact is interesting. I wondee why the Green Knights want Rei's Artifact and how many there are.
Revamp 4/17/13 . chapter 9
This chapter added to the mystery of the motives of the Artifact Hunters as well as bring depth to Rei's character.
Revamp 4/16/13 . chapter 8
Things are really building up around Rei and Tenjou. I like the ability of his Artifact and his character in general. I have to wonder about him being hit by a car and surviving. That's quite a mystery.
Revamp 4/16/13 . chapter 7
this new student seems interesting. I wonder what powers his Artifact has.
Revamp 4/10/13 . chapter 6
This chapter explains the last a lot better, and it portrays the emotions that I believed Shinya should have been feeling. It all makes better sense now, and I thought the artifact might have had something to do with the sudden confession.

Don't get me wrong, they make a good couple but I would rather their relationship come naturally. I hope that happens in later chapters now that the artifact has been removed.
Revamp 4/10/13 . chapter 5
So, the Artifact works on love? That's interesting, and a nice approach to it. However thier relationship seemed a little rushed. I feel like Shinya should have had more complications and inner turmoil over it.

Other than that, this chapter was good. I am enjoying your story so far.
Revamp 4/10/13 . chapter 4
There was some interesting interaction between Alice and Shinya here. Now I'm wondering what the Artifact is myself. Even if it was hard to write you pulled it off smoothly.
Revamp 4/10/13 . chapter 3
Shinya continues to analyze the source of Alice's problems. I feel sorry for Rei, being so discouraged because of the powers of her artifact. I hope she finds someone to love. I liked the fluffy moment with Alice and Shinya. It was interesting to see him lose composure.

I liked his thoughts on her blank eyes. I wonder if that's a side-effect of her artifact.
Revamp 4/5/13 . chapter 2
This chapter is also quite intriguing. Alice is showing her impish side and the appearance of another artifact has been made by Rei, whom I am really liking so far. I love the relation to Midas and Faust as back up to your artifacts. Brilliant move.
Revamp 4/3/13 . chapter 1
This story is great so far. I love the idea of the artifacts and thier conditions and terms. I also find your characters endearing and the interaction between Shinya and his maid comical and intriguing.
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