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Reviews for
White Lies
petbuddy
12/8/12 . chapter 1
nice poem enjoyed
Creepy McSteezerson
12/8/12 . chapter 1
I love this. Short, simple, direct and best of all there are those fantastic metaphors. Keep writing!