Damn, why'd you have to leave it on a cliffhanger? Why? Hurry and update soon, I'm looking forward to it!

Well, David sounds insane. Other than that, it's good she got the tracker out, but not good that the doctor lady found her

Nooooo not the YOLO...
Hey, don't worry about warning us about intimate scenes, this is the YA section of Fictionpress after all. But, ey, that's how they get money.
Anyhoo, I liked this chapter (other than YOLO) and Sloane doesn't really seem like too much of a badass, just from that note that she left

Huh, this was surprisingly funny. Ugh, a needle to the forehead sounds absolutely awful.

Good Chapter. I like the flashbacks. I hope you continue to put them in the story.

Good start. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Very interesting, although, I would like to have heard more of a back story for Quincey and Solane. Her deaths seems meaningless because I never knew her. Very nice! Update soon!