Guess what, I tried to read this on mobile and when I did it took me to the first chapter and when I read it it was about the end wasn't it? Does this mean that her first meeting with their father is going to be bad?
Also I saw your trailer for Etheria and I loved it, simple yet captivating

O.O I don't know if I want my suspicions to be correct or not...

I've been reading this story for a while now and haven't had time to review yet, but I really like. I find the "fake" girlfriend stories to be way overused and you have to pull it off really well, but I really think your doing that so far. My absolute favorite part was when she first met Trevor and he was pretending to be stuck in the elevator. In recent chapters though he's been so busy and cold I didn't really like him. This chapter though was so sweet. His story was so sad, but I really liked this chapter none the less. Good Job!

I think anybody would read this and love this story as much as I love watching rrcherrypie's videos{which is strangely enjoyable} and honestly, I find that I like the fact that Danae sometimes forgets things and does the unexpected

Once again, nice work. I love how Danae is guilty

Sweet please keep writing!

Awesome you gotta keep writing

Can I say I love you? Really, I do. You always make me get shivers whenever I read your stories

This was a fun chapter. I'm happy to see Danae succeeding so far!

XD Nice

Wonderful chapter! I'm so excited to see what happens next :)

When is she going to meet him? And what happened to Milo? Does she really know anything? Is everything as it seems?

That last quote made me very excited! Eager and nervous for Danae to meet their father.

Woahza, that was wow, I feel like admiring the craziness and perfectness of this story

I'm excited to learn more about this secretive pair of brothers and their family. And I'm REALLY excited to meet their father and see his reaction to Danae! Also, I love all the moments between Milo and Danae. :)