you're making me hungry with all these food metaphors...lol. So very well done.

Oh man...by the time I read "raspberry" I was sold. I adore your style, your word choice is unparallelled to any I've seen before. I've seen the occasional writer strike me with sensual words like "crimson" and "silk" but your refined placement allows me to move through the motions at a flowing pace as I read. Above all else your stanza organization and line structure strikes me most, I feel you put a lot of thought into how your lines are strung together. I love this poem, and while I am nitpicky with nonrhythmic poetry this one is spectacular.

BOOM! You see that' I felt it! Right in the feels!