I don't know how you do it, but you somehow manage to bring me back from my massive writing slumps with just a couple of lines. I don't know what it is about your writing that makes me want to pick up a pen and write, but...you're fantastic.

That being said, this poem is haunting. I can't completely wrap my head around the things it makes me feel. I wish I could write things like this.

I'm sorry. I'm being weird now.

i really love the tone in your writing. the way you describe things so factually and yet with such stunning imagery (i especially love the fourth stanza).

This is beautiful and heart-breaking. The little details like his even breathing as though he's never had a nightmare with the implication that you've had many are amazing. I love the tone, simultaneously at peace and helpless. Fantastic work.

Beaut