|Reviews for my jaw hurts|
| ink colored 1/27/13 . chapter 1
I don't know how you do it, but you somehow manage to bring me back from my massive writing slumps with just a couple of lines. I don't know what it is about your writing that makes me want to pick up a pen and write, but...you're fantastic.
That being said, this poem is haunting. I can't completely wrap my head around the things it makes me feel. I wish I could write things like this.
I'm sorry. I'm being weird now.
| rust phoenix 12/12/12 . chapter 1
i really love the tone in your writing. the way you describe things so factually and yet with such stunning imagery (i especially love the fourth stanza).
| electrical moon 12/10/12 . chapter 1
This is beautiful and heart-breaking. The little details like his even breathing as though he's never had a nightmare with the implication that you've had many are amazing. I love the tone, simultaneously at peace and helpless. Fantastic work.
| St. Valentine 12/10/12 . chapter 1