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| Reviews for Revenge In Odd Places |
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  PLL 12/19/12 . chapter 3 BEST ARIA2! |
| Loser223 12/19/12 . chapter 2 This is such a dumb story. It makes no sense. I hate it & YOU! Thank you, BRIAN DUNLOP Contact me at: 1800- you-suck JK! THIS STORY WAS AMAZING! IT MADE ME CRY! I LOVE YOU Dustin! |
 zayliearia 12/12/12 . chapter 4I need to read the rest tomorrow. But I promise I will. |
| zayliearia 12/12/12 . chapter 3 Some of the dialogue is a little foggy. But other than that it clears up a lot. Also Hoping you'll read my stories. -Zaylie- |
| Kate Drake 12/11/12 . chapter 1 First chapter is shor, but very interesting! Can't wait to read more. If you're looking for another supernatural story to read, check out mine :) |
| zayliearia 12/10/12 . chapter 2 Good job, I can not wait for more. It is a little confusing though, you need to clear up what moments are from what. You can do that by italizing parts from the past or whatever else. But that would help make things a little clear. Because you go from the parents dying and then to something about the guy that killed him, then to something that seems like a dream or something. It's all very confusing there. -Zaylie- |
| zayliearia 12/10/12 . chapter 1 It seems like a good beginning, but be careful about how you continue this story, and don't force it out. Let it come to you. Also, great job on the details and try to make your chapters longer in the future. -Zaylie- |
