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| Reviews for Plain Jane |
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  Hey you 5/14/13 . chapter 3 OMG update already! I want to read the rest of the story and see where you take it from here. Please update real soon! |
 RussianDestruction 4/13/13 . chapter 1I seriously love everything about this story. I found it thanks to the teaser bit you have on your ff . net profile. Go you! |
| Sarah C.W 3/17/13 . chapter 3 I absolutely love this story, cannot wait for the next update. 3 -S |
| yay 1/21/13 . chapter 3 I feel like disposing of the evidence is going to backfire horribly. Everyone saw him covered in Nancy's blood, and getting rid of the shirt just makes him look more suspicious. I wonder why Tobias and Frank dislike each other. Given that Tobias seems like a good person, I'm automatically taking his side without knowing exactly what the problem is. And what's wasn't Nancy? So many questions in this chapter. And one more: "The shirt was way too small". I'm confused about why Tobias said that. Anyway, this story is lovely thus far, and I can't wait to see the questions answered. |
| Jani 1/14/13 . chapter 2 Great start to this story! I really like the characters, they're so creative. And now the mystery deepens... |
| MoonBronze115 1/7/13 . chapter 2 Really interesting! I'd love to read more! |
| EsemmeTresemme 1/2/13 . chapter 2 Erh. Merh. Gerhd. I think you just hooked me on fiction press. Either that or your writing. Probably both D: now I'll NEVER get any work done! What have you done?! Lol, but seriously, love it and cannot wait for the next chapter! |
| summerful21 12/31/12 . chapter 2 *cue dramatic music* Why in the world would she need to wear a cute dress to see Tobias covered in blood? Awesome chapter, I thought it was, as always, interesting and funny (LOL to graveyard yoga), can't wait to see what's happening next. |
| Witanowice 12/30/12 . chapter 2 This is fantastic! Whatever you do, don't stop writing it! I've read your work on FanFiction and I trust that you will be just as good an author here! Please, check out my page! |
| yay 12/29/12 . chapter 2 Things are starting to get interesting. CC: "Her business there was something much more benign." You use the word "something" a lot, and in this case I think the sentence would work better without it. |
| yay 12/22/12 . chapter 1 This looks really entertaining thus far. I look forward to seeing both the relationships and the plot develop further. |
| SummerAngel95 12/21/12 . chapter 1 Great story so far! I can't wait to see where you will go with it! :) |
| summerfaye 12/17/12 . chapter 1 It's really great so far! I love it! |
| summerful21 12/16/12 . chapter 1 Haha, I'm liking your story. It sounds like Jane has a pretty awesome, chaotic life. It's early, of course, but I do hope Jane ends up having more personality than this- she's kind of bland so far. |
| Nikki Nix 12/12/12 . chapter 1 This has really gotten me interested in finding out what will happen next. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
