You'll be someone' someday everyone's beautiful you just have to wait for someone who can get over their own ego! I'm in 8th grade and I not the prettiest but my boyfriend is the most amazing boyfreind ever.

This is good. I like it. Clearly written, good visuals. Its easy to connect to.

Very painful. Made me sad. Write some more! Maybe something about the many facets of love, 'cause it's not all hurt.