|Reviews for Seek now eternal|
| John Keel 4/6/13 . chapter 1
That is one of the best poems I've read online. Not really sure how to review it, not being a poetry person really, but that is sick.
| David Swiss 12/14/12 . chapter 1
I've not read such a good poem in ages... it's really vivid and hard-hitting. Five stars.
| Shauni Cooper 12/11/12 . chapter 1
This was extremely pleasant to read and very well presented. Some people would probably point out that the line 'seek now eternal' is a little redundant, but I do not believe so. It evokes emphasis. Each line stood out, with a different point of view, but united in theme. It projects the sense of trying to quench the unreachable, and you delivered that aspect of your piece quite well. Over all, I enjoyed this piece very much. :)
As always, keep writing!
| yukiteddy 12/11/12 . chapter 1
nice poem )
| FictionHeart 12/11/12 . chapter 1
I like it, but I also think that you said the "seek now eternal" line a few times too many, it could be stronger if you made it a little sparser. Still, thanks for sharing.
| icry 12/11/12 . chapter 1
Read my story plz Penelope and Olivia my names icey the ice princess