That is one of the best poems I've read online. Not really sure how to review it, not being a poetry person really, but that is sick.

I've not read such a good poem in ages... it's really vivid and hard-hitting. Five stars.

This was extremely pleasant to read and very well presented. Some people would probably point out that the line 'seek now eternal' is a little redundant, but I do not believe so. It evokes emphasis. Each line stood out, with a different point of view, but united in theme. It projects the sense of trying to quench the unreachable, and you delivered that aspect of your piece quite well. Over all, I enjoyed this piece very much. :)

As always, keep writing!

-Shauni

nice poem )

I like it, but I also think that you said the "seek now eternal" line a few times too many, it could be stronger if you made it a little sparser. Still, thanks for sharing.

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