|Reviews for Marisa|
| Beccyluo 5/13/13 . chapter 5
This is really good! I love the bite-sized chapters, it really keeps me reading :D
| Writerandreader 4/3/13 . chapter 2
This story is going places, hopefully. I like it. It could be written better but... Oh well.
| malory79080 4/2/13 . chapter 5
Being immortal must be hard...
| malory79080 4/2/13 . chapter 4
I LOVE lasagne! It made me laugh to hear about it.
| malory79080 4/2/13 . chapter 3
Ha, her blushing is funny! :)
| malory79080 4/2/13 . chapter 2
Very interesting! I like it!
| malory79080 4/2/13 . chapter 1
| Reiz16 3/8/13 . chapter 5
This talk of immortality is very interesting. Good job.
| Reiz16 3/8/13 . chapter 4
I liked that they ate lasagna, as that is my faavorite food, and it was cute how Aliki called her sweetie.
| Reiz16 3/8/13 . chapter 2
Net ball sounds interesting. Like it was, creative for you to make up such a sport.
| Reiz16 3/8/13 . chapter 1
Interesting. Plus, the name Rue makes me think of the Hunger Games.
| myheart4you 3/5/13 . chapter 1
OOOO, sounds interesting. What are you doing, lecturing your sister? This sounds like Mockingjay, a little. But not enough lol. I liked it!
| Shin M. Hiram 2/21/13 . chapter 5
I never expected this! You do many unexpected things, I love it.
As for your conventions, I saw that you leave out a letter in a word and that makes it a whole new word. That, and you need to indent when a new person is speaking, typically.
Other than that, great job. This piece is growing, and with a little nurturing, it will be beautiful.
| JessRobStar 1/29/13 . chapter 4
I really like this story, its interesting
| Skryx 1/25/13 . chapter 4
LASAGNA! Damn, now I have a craving...
Unexpected twist of events... Update soon, I wanna know MORE!