|Reviews for Deaf|
| myonyxnight 12/13/12 . chapter 1
this is a wonderful poem its sho but fd ith ts of powerful emotions
| Ink Flows Into Power 12/12/12 . chapter 1
Really good poem. I loved the whole idea that when somebody does not listen, it is very tempting to simply stop trying. I also like the turn around - the person finally begins to listen, it made me feel happy that you had not lost the will to try with her. My only real criticism is that "I consider to go mute" is not very good grammatically. Why not try "I consider going mute"? This will help the flow of the piece as well.
Other than that, excellent work and well done!